Each Year the Crime Rate Increases.
What Are the Causes of Crime and What Could Be Done to Prevent This Rise in Criminal Activity?
Crime is an issue of increasing concern across the world and the reasons behind this are numerous with high unemployment rates and the overuse of alcohol and drug being dominant. To address these issues, the government not only needs to tighten laws but also create more jobs and make necessary policies to reduce crime.
It is apparent that there is a direct link between unemployment with criminal behavior. To illustrate, in disadvantaged areas unemployed people are often struggling to generate sufficient income to provide for themselves or their dependents. Such problem would be exacerbated, were the government to fail to adjust the minimum wage so as to provide decent living conditions for the poor. In combination, many will likely resort to stealing as a means of sustaining themselves. Furthermore, alcohol and drug abuse are major contributing factors behind the rise in crime, as these substances often impair decision-making abilities and induce users to consider violence as a way to release pent-up frustration or to resolve disagreement.
To remedy the aforementioned issues, the government should introduce stringent laws to deter people from committing crime and longer sentences for persistent offenders. However, to effectively decrease criminal activity, it imperative for the authorities to ensure social equality through providing free or subsidized education to poor sections of a society, which can at least increase a poor individual’s employability. Simultaneously, more jobs should be generated to directly reduce unemployment and consequently poverty. More importantly, rehabilitation programs and reformatories need to be invested and upgraded thoroughly as they assist an ex-convict in reintegrating into society, thus gradually decreasing recidivism.
In conclusion, severe work shortages and the excessive consumption of alcohol and drug have generally resulted in the increases in the number of criminals. Therefore, a package of long-term solutions is required, more than just the imposition of harsher punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ment to fail to adjust the minimum wage so as to provide decent living conditions for th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, so, therefore, thus, as to, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79605263158 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3289993755 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651315789474 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.498880152 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139640467207 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427296536829 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438393033928 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827001956711 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521180071003 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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