Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Nowadays the internet is one of the most crucial part of our life. However, every invention has disadvantages as well as advantages and the internet is not an exception. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that the internet affects world mostly positively. I feel this way in two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet provides an access to the vast amount of information, so every person can receive needed information for free. Moreover, there are a lot different useful websites and services, in the internet. Therefore, it makes easier many everyday activities. For instance, what is really important for me, because I am a student, is that the internet allows me to study faster and more efficiently. Firstly, I do not need to go to the library and waste my time on commuting to the university and on searching a special book or journal. I can use one Google and find what I want in one minute. Secondly, the internet provides me an access to the many services, that can help me in my studying. For example, it can be a website on which I can construct a graph or a website that can solve an equation for me. As a result, I can expand my level of knowledge and improve my grades exceedingly quickly.
Moreover, the internet allows people with disabilities to become an actual part of our world. So, they can find a job and meet a lot of people without any problems and limits that existed in the offline world. For instance, when I started to work in company after I finished my bachelor’s course, I worked as big data analyst in the team of five people and one of my teammates worked only at home. First, I did not realize, why he never had gone to our office, because we did not talk on this topic. However, one day I asked him about it, and he explained, that he is disabled, so he has no legs because of accident, and the internet gave him an opportunity to be happy and work on a job that is really satisfying for him.
In conclusion, the internet is one of the most vital inventions, because it facilitates the development of an individual persons and society at all, and the most important thing is that the internet decreases the level of inequality in our contemporary world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
.... To begin with, the internet provides an access to the vast amount of information, so e...
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Line 2, column 644, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...ute. Secondly, the internet provides me an access to the many services, that can help me ...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nity to be happy and work on a job that is really satisfying for him. In conclusion, the internet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56467661692 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78218123288 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5439343772 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5789473684 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141183458036 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051728346345 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510274112249 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107366784269 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506141962886 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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