In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
As the claim is very generalised because of the anecdotes of scientific inventions and discoveries achievements were made in few centuries from the young generation.So this claim which author is making is not wrong completely, because the young generation have a enthusiastic min d and full of creative thoughts and ideas which they portray.And their urge to learn something new and to put that in real life problems and solve it with a quick time is their passion for life.
In the field of detective,Lawyer and the soldiers also who are serving for country have that adraline rush to field for the solution and to keep fighting for it unles you get victory in it.These youngesters have a great enthusiasm, Courage and creative mind in them to get their work day at any cost.Where as the elder;y people or generation also have the enthusiasm to work or tackle their fight but in comparison with youngster it is less, As they get a little bored also and tired of doing thoes jobs from a long period of time and their efficinecy of doing the work pr getting it done becomes's less.As elderly people are bounded to take less risk for the work which need's to be done and thing that they have a family to serve behind so they work everything with strategy and have less efficiency in that.
Scientist like Galilieo and Einstein never gave up their dreams in discovering the things which they discovered.Infact one of the great Scientis use to stay that on every failure of his invention he used to invent something new which even he was not knowing about it,they had the obsession and the love towards their work and that's why they had curiosity and happines to do their work ,and the amount of happiness they use to get after the work was completed ,it had not spot in there which encouraged them to do more great jobs in thier lifes in future.
Therefore it was rightly said by author that beginners, young generation, use to make a lot of contribution and huge important contribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67428571429 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916810788 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545714285714 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 23.0359550562 378% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 238.329997063 60.3974514979 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.0 118.986275619 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.5 23.4991977007 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0650368051448 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535401646086 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466469291928 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535401646086 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466469291928 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.3 14.1392134831 313% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.37 48.8420337079 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 12.1743820225 296% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 11.2143820225 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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