Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology has been evolving every day in fact every minute. The importance of technology and the hold it has on life is far more than what we can think. Our life massively depends on it without us even realizing. But at the same time when we say technology is here to help humans and solve their problems, it certainly also true that our ability to think has been deteriorating. One basic example of this can be the calculator. With the invention on calculator, doing calculations has become a piece of cake. Any time we come across some problem that requires calculation, be it even a small calculation we type in the numbers and operations on the calculator and get our answers. Although very fast and efficient, our mathematical ability to think and solve the equations on our own has reduced. As an evidence if we ask any random person even a basic calculation like 9 times 6, he/she will have to think long and hard to get the right answer. This surely would not have been the case in the past when people relied on their mental ability to solve math rather than being heavily dependent on technology. Considering the 21st century, currently the biggest hype is around the Artificial Intelligence (AI) technology and though just a couple of years back it seemed futuristic it has already become a massively influenced our lives. I, personally use Chat GPT, the most widely used AI currently, almost every day. Be it write an email or solving an error in a code (being an IT engineer), I always turn to Chat GPT for answers. From the start itself people were so curious about this this technology and now we are just so used to it being there in our lives. AI tools like these can generate some amazing emails by just typing in a simple prompt telling the subject of the mail. We don't have to think or stress our minds on will this writing be enough our is it framed correctly, the AI simply does it for us. It has only been two years since its birth but we can already see the evidence that our ability to think for ourselves is surely deteriorating. Technology is not bad, in fact it is a good friend but we need to know how to make the right utilization of it. As long as we use it for our own betterment it will remain as a friend but when we over step our use that is when it may turn against us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1472, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ail or solving an error in a code being an IT engineer, I always turn to Chat GPT for...
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Line 1, column 1478, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
... solving an error in a code being an IT engineer, I always turn to Chat GPT for answers....
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Line 1, column 1578, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...art itself people were so curious about this this technology and now we are just so used ...
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Line 1, column 1782, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mpt telling the subject of the mail. We dont have to think or stress our minds on wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39344262295 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53125735404 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512880562061 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2502862143 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7368421053 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63157894737 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0200610376626 0.243740707755 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00749173348016 0.0831039109588 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00920553346277 0.0758088955206 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0200610376626 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.