Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether physical condition or mental strength is more essential to become successful in sport. From my perspective, both are of equal importance to gain great sports achievements.
On the one hand, mental strength plays a key role in alethes’ success. To commence with, individuals having strong wills tend to have more motivation to work hard and succeed. It can foster their competitive spirits and even make them have a win-at-all-cost attitude. Hence, they can focus on the training programs which may have a variety of boring and repetitive lessons. In addition, mental strengths can be applied when their pressure is high or the odds against them in the competition. Consequently, they can more easily overcome the failures and have more motivation to persist in their training toward to the success.
However, good physical condition is also an integral factor for people who wish to succeed in sports. All the sports demand physical strength for stamina and endurance, for example judo and boxing or sailing and ride-hoursing. Let's take the case of a well-known athlete as an example. In one competition, because of the lack of physical health, he decided to use illegal drugs to enhance and maintain top physical condition. As a result, this put his career in risk. Moreover, having strong physical condition may contribute to injury deterrence. This is because the healthy, efficient body composition may often derive from comprehensive year-round strength training program; therefore, a resilient musculo-skeletal system can act as a shock absorber and join stabilizer, minimizing the impact of accidents in a competition.
In conclusion, both physical and mental strength are necessary to become successful in sport, but it is impossible to succeed without being physically strong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.393728223 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04929612364 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1167184668 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258743093341 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831505578538 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849712659184 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193528778996 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08992144446 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.