Nowadays, a lot of companies switch to open offices. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
There are innumerable reasons why people might disapprove of this adjustment, the first objection is that having too much auditory and visual distractions in the way would therefore cause inattentiveness and in turn reduce productivity. Another argument against this change would be the lack of privacy, having a colleague be able to give a quick glance at your computer every single time is quite disturbing, in fact in the worst case this can turn into confidential info being leaked and being taken advantage of.
In spite of the downsides mentioned above , I believed that tearing down barriers in workspace could build a sense of camaraderie between workers and eliminate hierarchy that have been laying around for decades is a positive measure . First and foremost it could partly slash construction cost of building walls and barriers to partition the workspace, although not affect much but this can be essential to the premises appearance. It should also be noted that having a shared office space can boost the creativity for example the big corporation is using right now, moreover sharing an office could facilitate communication and collaboration between workers.
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- Nowadays a lot of companies switch to open offices Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 11
- Some say parents whose children are breaking the law should be punished in some way To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one s own family Why might people want to do this Is it a positive or negative development 67
- The compensation of senior management should be reasonable and consistent with wages of the workers Do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n spite of the downsides mentioned above , I believed that tearing down barriers i...
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Message: Did you mean 'lying around'?
Suggestion: lying around
... and eliminate hierarchy that have been laying around for decades is a positive measure . Fir...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...around for decades is a positive measure . First and foremost it could partly slas...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'premises'' or 'premise's'?
Suggestion: premises'; premise's
...t much but this can be essential to the premises appearance. It should also be noted tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29946524064 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92287698621 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.2022899763 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 198.2 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323202770705 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157121381585 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222709296757 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243345669391 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00754218147842 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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