Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is sometimes argued that in today digial’s age, shopping has become easier for people thanks to modern technology. While I accept that technology can make consumers suffer from several dangers, I still believe that its benefits are likely outweigh its drawbacks.
On the one hand, shopping online can bring consumers numerous unsatisfying expericences. Initially, purchasing something without seeing it in person can make people buy products which are unquality and do not valuable with the expenses. People can be cheated when they consumed items on some unverified platforms as the sellers can send products that may not serve the needs of customers or send wrong items, as well as do not accept double-checking products. In fact, the rate of scammers in recent days has increased significant compared to the past.
On the other hand, technology has made shopping became a crucial part of daily life. Firstly, shopping online is extremely convenient. Because with the widespread of Internet, people can shop wherever and whenever they want just by a mobile phone or Internet connected devices. In addition, while shopping on online platforms, such as Shoppee, Lazada and Tiki, consumers can have a wide range of choices which helps them to compare about either price or product’s quality easier, leading to acquire something new with the most reasonanle expense. Moreover, it also help busy people, who do not have enough time to go shopping in person, save their time for this activities.
In conclusion, while modern technology can bring some disadvantages for consumers, I believe that its merits are tend to blur these demerits due to their convenience for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... reasonanle expense. Moreover, it also help busy people, who do not have enough tim...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...shopping in person, save their time for this activities. In conclusion, while mode...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...onsumers, I believe that its merits are tend to blur these demerits due to their con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77881476047 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2543364564 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18968648149 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718155513688 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057780784316 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11937812911 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043566112997 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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