Topic: The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015.
The graph illustrates the percentage of genres of magazines, including sports, food, fashion, health, and others sold by an enterprise in three years 1975, 1995, and 2015.
As can be seen, it is apparent that sports magazines were the most dominant, gaining popularity among readers throughout the examined period. In contrast, almost all genres of magazines underwent a dramatic decline after rising rocketly.
Looking at the chart, the ratio of sports newspapers took the lead, accounting for over a third and more than three folders compared to the ratio of food in 1975. In the next 20 years, the sales figure for sports magazines witnessed a tiny increase of approximately 5% and then continued to grow to reach roughly the peak. Noticeably, the figure for food newspapers experienced a rocket growth to reach the highest point merely 23% in 1995 before plummeting to similar proportions in the first year of the period.
Turning to fashion and health areas, both of them showed an impressive portion in 1995, making up around 23% for the former and 27% for the latter. Over the two decades, the two ratios underwent a significant decrease. There was only a tiny percentage of fashion magazines in 2015, while after declining a folder, the sales figure for health newspapers remained stable for the rest of the period. Meanwhile, the proportion of the others fluctuated considerably and finally bounded back to the same proportion as the first year merely 25%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, then, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10330578512 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70635920847 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1711529524 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174033100446 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632940750472 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511171803803 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11089132986 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558348467644 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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