In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the problem of ageing population growth has in a heated dabeta. While some people think that there will increase social problems, and others believe that more elderly people in our society can bring benefit. I firmly believe that the disadvantages of having the elderly outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, ageing population can bring benefit to the society. Firstly, it can promote the development of the medical system and competency. This is because with the ageing growth, our bodies may have some health problems, such as heart diseases, which means that governments need to build up better medical system and improve the technology of medical to save people lives. Secondly, young people can learn different things from the old. Many elderly people have fullfill experiences not only in work, but also in lives. They can give some advices to the youth when they are in trouble. Thirdly, the rate of the lives will become slow. As we all know, we all live in a fater rate life and have no time to enjoy our life. However, with the increasing of the ageing population, many people can be realize that we need to stop to companion our parents who are old, and learn how to work-life balance, thereby slowing our life speed.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks if our society has more elderly people. First of all, it is clear that the larbor will become shortage. This is because many old people they retire or get sick, which means that the number of workers will decrease. Therefore, many companies can not employ people to work, our economy will be influenced. Additionally, many young people will have high pressure. When old people have serious illness, their childrens need to care their parents and working at the same time, which will increase the level of the living stress. Last but not least, the finance of basic facilities will increase. Many old people can not work and have health problems, which means that government need to pay a huge of money to improve the wealth system to protect old people, it will raise the spending on basic facilities.
In conclusion, while elderly people can bring benefits to our society, there are many disadvantages is outweight than beneift
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40935440775 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7671978499 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298738590073 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102397477933 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785918211668 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226790823465 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534205309927 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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