Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the overpopulation has influence on the accommodation and amenities in the large city due to insufficient of housing and goods for resident. Some people believe that only the local policy can have a solution to tackle many issues in terms of uncomfortable and inconvenience for living. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement for some reasons in the essay.
The foremost reason supporting the above idea is that we also have the community organizations for the citizens whenever they have problems especially in addressing the housing storages. Because, this community is the collaboration between government and private factor to take responsibility to support them due to nonprofits for all of the status. For example, in Sai Gon city, with large population from many states in Vietnam, with the high cost for rental and limited changes to live there but they receive the investment from this organization for settling in the big city.
Another reason is that the young generation have a smart idea and create the strong innovative housing models such as micro-housing and tiny houses. In addition, by this concept, we can address the problem of limited space for living that the individual have opportunity to design their house for maximize efficiency and utilize space-saving features such as multifunctional furniture, foldable beds. In other word, the community organizations can cope this idea for many people who live in this spaces so they have wide range of option for dealing with issues.
In summary, not only may the government take action to generate spaces for people to live, but with the development of the community, we have many opportunities to contribute to tackling these problems.
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also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01736601969 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9065696753 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103779289132 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499066718625 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230204285354 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756618626123 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250251823359 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.