It is argued that getting married before Finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The notion of marriage differs from people to people and place to place. But this different concept of marriage always creates debate among people ; some people believes that getting before finishing school or getting job is not a good idea while some people think that getting married at early is good way to settle down. This essay will further elaborate on this topic.
To begin with, getting married before finishing school or getting job is a ridiculous idea in this modern age. This is the age of technology and knowledge where you need to have an educational degree and job to live an independent and satisfactory life. For example, early marriage before getting academic degree or job has contributed in poor living standard of people in rural places of Nepal as they do not have the means to earn money for the family. Therefore, marriage should be done when people are settled down and have the feeling that they can start family and support them.
Despite these irrefutable facts some people is of the opinion that people should be married at early age because they will be more settled when they get married. These type of people are general driven by their culture, tradition and belong to developing countries or the countries where religion is most dominant factor. For instance, the rate of early marriage in the countries like Nepal and India is higher compare to other south East Asian countries because they have the culture of marrying at early age from centuries.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed the every aspect behind the given topic. In my opinion, people should get married after they finish their study and have a good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91134751773 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34871516685 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0873384559 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235229800685 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981797863219 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12420622757 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165812384173 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695019020028 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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