The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
It is fact that the world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues . Pollution is consider a most important and dangerous problem all around the globe . Many governments and societies are doing lots of initiations to resolve this issue as this is most challenging issue in current era .
Globalization affects social and economic situations of the world with aspect of leading innovations . Automobile is consider as most successful invention of past century . This invention leads the development of many nations as many countries economies like Japan and German are depend on automobile industry . Automobiles change the mode of transportation which lead transportation of goods and humans too easy and less time consuming but with respect to positive results it lead very dangerous and serious issues to mankind .
As gross domestic growth of developing countries is in increasing trend thus dramatically increase the standard of living of people specially in Asian countries . Thus the sale of automobiles increases but impact from the emission make a serious impact on environment which rose up carbon monoxide and other harmful gases . Government should take serious steps towards this problem or apply new laws to overcome this challenge . Other solution of this problem is electric cars and Fuel cell cars as these vehicles are environment friendly and create zero emissions . Secondly , the production of diesel vehicles should be slower down as diesel vehicles are main source of pollution .
In my words, pollution is serious problem for mankind ,environment and for our mother earth . Government and societies should aware the general public though various policies and laws .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, thus, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47908745247 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99216797645 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0341548976 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18438825475 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678443886565 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827539104524 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119851564004 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842886509799 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.