Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples
A new born is flawless and learns all things from its surrounding. Of all the teachers, parents are the most important one as it is they whose actions and behavior is reflected upon the child. I am of the opinion that parents should be legally accountable for their child’s action and behavior. In this essay, we will analyze how a parent’s action effects the child’s behavior and action.
Firstly, parents are the primary person to which a child looks upon and it is their behavior that a child infuses. For example, my parents always despised a certain section of society and I grew up to follow the same. This clearly implies how a parent’s behavior reflects upon the child. Thus concluding that parents should be legally responsible for their child’s behavior and thinking.
The second reason is that parent’s actions are inculcated into the child. For example, my father is a businessman and it was his rule that never cheat on customers, when I opened my business, invariantly I included it as a rule of thumb. This example clearly projects, how a child’s action was based on parent’s action. Hence, it can be concluded that parents are responsible for their child’s act.
Therefore, a conclusion can be drawn that parent’s action and behavior contribute to the child’s development. Parents are legally responsible as it is they who shape their child’s future. It is recommended that parents should always exemplify themselves as a perfect citizen so that their child grow up to be one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09656993021 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474308300395 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1789623893 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296351781148 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143296871973 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10986232166 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222924482128 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289245093623 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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