There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a form of art that is enjoyed all around the world in various forms. With advent of International music, however, the existence of traditional form is being questioned. Although, the reasons as to why music is appreciated, vary, the primary factor that attracts people to this art form is related to its contribution in improving quality of life.
Music is now viewed as source of entertainment. The fact that people don't need to learn music or acquire skills to understand it, makes it so popular amongst the masses. Further, like most other art forms such as painting or literature, music is known to affect people on emotional level. It has an ability to elicit a change in mood as well as reduce anxiety levels. Research has shown that music can ease stress and even provide pain-relief in certain cases. It has also been proven to be of theareupetic help in case of health conditions such as dementia. Apart , from this music has been an integral part of social occasions worldwide since ancient times. Thus, music plays an important role in social, physiological and psychological aspects of people lives.
While, every part of the world and community has their own traditional and folk form of music, the International music of today's age is taking over the global audience. Traditional music is a product of the strong cultural heritage and traditions of every country. It binds the citizen of that country to its roots and culture. Therefore, maintaining its presence is of prime importance. However, International music also has an advantage, in that, it allows people all over the globe to find a common form of art to enjoy. This can help to improve the bonding between people from different cultures and societies.
To conclude, I partly agree, that traditional music should be given more preference over International music, as I believe, that both forms of music have an equally important part in adding to the quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96960486322 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79831544499 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9232102248 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399610682374 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128681739776 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924225279788 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272318235841 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334965468629 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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