It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
It‘s the truth that Friend is one of the most crucial people in your life. It is a thing that doesn’t come so easily due to making a good relationship with someone. you may give some time for creating friend qualities like trust, reliance etc. while someone doesn’t want to make any new Bonds with anyone and still keep old friends because probably it may waste their time. In my opinion, I totally disagree with that point for some reasons which I will explain in this essay.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that life is like a journey. It indicates that nothing lasts forever and something may be changed by the time factor. So your life would not be with your friend all the time because they might have a different path from you. It is inevitable fact that your life will continually change and it will bring you to a new place and new people that you may not be familiar. By human’s instinct, They are capable of acclimation with various circumstance. Making a new connection would be a better solution which you can get through this situation. So I will bring my case as an example, when I was a new student in my high school, I didn’t know anyone at all. At that time, I struggled to look for some friends. and finally with my effort, I got more than five people as my friend and nowadays we have been a good relationship for three years.
Moreover, Making a new relationship with someone has some splendid benefits which are firstly making you more open-minded person because if you still keep an old relationship and reject new bonds from new friend. you will have only these friends in your life and you already who they are On the other hand If you accept with these Bonds but not breaking up with old friends. you will learn something new from your new friend like you will know more characters of people. Secondly, According to this action, you will definitely have more connections which benefit you many ways like when you get some problems which you can’t solve yourself, you can lend some hands from your friends to solve it faster.
To sum up, I firmly believe that making new friends is also important because it is another way to survive from unfamiliar situation and it makes you a more openminded person and you will have more connections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63746958637 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51242907014 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476885644769 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1876258049 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.315789474 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312337282666 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100638063292 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857771798174 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212806900264 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359138281885 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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