In some countries, the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
In some parts of the world, many people have been increasingly deciding to live alone recently. This trend happens because of some reasons, and I believe that this development has several drawbacks.
To begin with, there are some factors leading to the fact that many people want to live by themselves. The first cause could be that they are too busy at work, which is likely to lead to a lack of time for themselves. As a result, they do not want to live with their family as they are likely to be afraid of having not enough time for family members of theirs. Additionally, many people do not start their own family due to financial burdens. For example, in Tokyo, accommodation fees are extremely high to almost its citizens, and many parents can not afford to send their children to school.
Besides, there are many reasons why the trend of living alone brings some disadvantages. First, as many people do not want to get married, society might face aging-population problems. For instance, as the number of elderly Japanese are rising, this country is lack of workforce. Furthermore, people could have plenty of difficulties when they get older as no one takes care of them. For example, elderly people usually suffer many illnesses when they get old, and they would feel lonely when doing it without having relatives by their sides.
In conclusion, many people are choosing to live by themselves due to several causes, and it seems to me that this tendency is a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8326848249 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64739029563 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7040507479 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214187358391 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878693596011 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831690092364 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176614486894 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954000984259 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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