More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend?
In this contemporary world, well-known types of cars, fashionable items, and other items are increasingly wanted. This trend happens due to some reasons, and I believe that this development has several drawbacks.
To begin with, there are some factors leading to the fact that many people put famous product items on their wish lists. Firstly, as personal incomes in some countries have been raised significantly, people might have much more money to spend on buying well-known products which are usually expensive. For example, ten years ago, most people in Asia could not afford to buy Apple’s smart mobile devices such as iPad or iPhone which are owned easily at the moment. Secondly, since most people have access to the Internet, they have more information about brands. As a result, they might want to have those latest-trend and high-quality products. For example, even German brands of cars such as Mercedes and BMW are obviously expensive, many Malaysian are owning them because they are ranked top international car table.
Besides, there are many reasons why the trend of desiring valuable items bring some disadvantages. First, as most of these are considered as money-consuming items, some people might be lack of money for their accommodation. For example, many Japanese people have loans of banks in order to buy an Italian Audi car, which leads to hard-working for many years to pay off.
Furthermore, as people are increasingly buying items which they do not really need, it is a massive waste of money. For instance, a Kevin Klein t-shirt might cost USD 100 for people in Indonesia to buy, while they can spend about USD 15 only for a similar one which is local.
In conclusion, there are many causes of people’s desires to have famous items, and it seems to me that this trend brings many disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...are obviously expensive, many Malaysian are owning them because they are ranked top intern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76902377057 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5020072943 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263039770675 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905205534621 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453225950547 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152355840459 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054885342155 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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