In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Inventions have been playing a huge role for society in the past 100 years. They have helped society to overcome various barriers. These were once thought to be pretty hard to accomplish. But thanks to humans being noodling, antibiotics, airplanes, and computers came to be the differentiation in people's lives.
First of all, with the advancement of medicine, antibiotics have helped to lessen people's pain. They were tested and proved to be very efficient against many ailments. Without them, everyone would still be suffering with maladies.
Moreover, another huge invention is the airplanes. They are one of the safest and fastest ways of transportation. With them, it is possible to work abroad. Many entrepreneurs have private planes that allows them to travel faster for meetings, for example, to travel among states or among countries.
However, in my opinion, the best invention made is the computers. They facilitate our day-to-day activities, making our working experience easier and more effective. For instance, scientists use them for measurements. They program computers to realize thousands of tasks in a couple of minutes. What is more, computers also help us to work abroad. There are some specific software that allows us to work with foreign colleagues, using internet connections.
Finally, not only have computers been providing us with astonishing input, but they have invaluable potential for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42600896861 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92588440193 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636771300448 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1742847194 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.2222222222 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3888888889 20.9669160288 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185904344262 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586773890456 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818025591742 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990684722992 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519042028452 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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