Do you believe that professional athletes make good role model for young people?
As we know, many youngsters may become future role model. But today these youngsters must practice and train themselves on their desire and passion. Most of the youngsters train on the basis of their role model. They want to achieve every thing their stars have achieved.
Youngsters now a days, preferred to be free without any pressure of their parents as well as their teachers. But they must be clear about their future they have to face. Their will be a dramatic change on the people who are focused on different carrier. Some of them who are interested in cricket have Virat Koli as their role model. And some people may be interested in dance whose inspiration may be Michel Jackson. These inspiring people with out their knowledge would help the common people to achieve their goals.
According to the growing tendency, the main conflict occur on the population. There are many people in the competition to achieve goals and their dreams as well. Some people may also keep up themselves as their role model. like dressing up and making hair as they do.
Some people may also change his or her daily curriculum according to their inspiration. These professional athletes make a drastic difference in the life of each individual . They also make a tattoo of their names.Some people may also give their lives when their models loss. Some people may also commit suicide in the mad love for the inspirations. But many young people develop in life or achieve any thing is just because of their role model.
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...eir stars have achieved. Youngsters now a days, preferred to be free without any press...
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... Michel Jackson. These inspiring people with out their knowledge would help the common p...
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...keep up themselves as their role model. like dressing up and making hair as they do....
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...ifference in the life of each individual . They also make a tattoo of their names....
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...young people develop in life or achieve any thing is just because of their role model.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85384615385 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42807911324 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8728338099 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4210526316 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198408048761 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075495995421 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060474942998 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139721804939 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615877739025 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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