Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that it is better to work quickly and risk making mistakes rater tan work gradually, but there are doubts about whether such a statement bears much truth. However, the opponents still challenge that position, stating that even though in today's world everything is changing instantly, still the work should be done slowly and with the confidence that everything is correct. While there is much to consider and contrast between both fields of thought, I concur with the latter opinion and have two reasons for doing so. Still, this deserves further speculation and scrutiny, which I will delve into.
To begin, by working gradually, there is less chance to produce a mistake, which means that people save time and energy since they do not need to repeat the process. In contrast, when someone works faster, the possibility of mistake increases, and the one will be forced to repeat the process from the beginning by spending a double amount of time and energy. I have to admit that my example has profoundly influenced my opinion on this matter. When I was writing my dissertation in Physics, I needed to make a cumbersome calculations. Tremendously hard was it for me not only that they were very arduous but also that the deadline was in a few weeks, and I decided to make all calculations faster than usual. On the one hand, because I was spending less time and was in a rush, I was able to finish all the estimates in a week. On the other hand, I obtained the erroneous results and needed to revise all the calculations. Even though it took me blood, sweat, and tears to find the mistake by repeating all the estimates from the beginning, I still missed the deadline, and my grade was lower because of that. If I had not worked quickly, I would not have made the mistake and would not have missed the deadline.
Furthermore, by working slowly, there is less chance to make an irreversible mistake, which makes a person feel guilty and depressed. In other words, working gradually helps the person to get rid of negative emotions. My friend Andrew is a typical example. A few years ago, he was working at a printing house, where he was printing newspapers. One day he wanted to publish a double amount of papers for which he would get a higher salary. Even though he accomplished this task still before leaving the work, he found out that the sequence of pages in the publications was wrong. As a consequence, the papers were not released, and he needed to pay all the losses. Moreover, it costs him a few months wages, which makes him feel depressed. If he had not rushed, he would not have made a mistake and would not felt depressed.
In the light of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that it is better to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. This is because not only because it would save time and energy for not fixing the mistakes but also can help to get rid of the feeling of guilt and depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...opponents still challenge that position, stating that even though in todays world...
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Suggestion: calculation
... Physics, I needed to make a cumbersome calculations. Tremendously hard was it for me not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in contrast, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63688212928 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55161765343 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467680608365 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3375457602 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22255171333 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618502427509 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725149762549 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154999646761 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659000115675 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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