we recommend that the monarch book open a cafe...
The claim asserted by the author here that the opening of cafe at he monarch books which is well popular in its local area and being in business more then twenty year, will increase the population and attract more customers. While it may be possible that being famous and well known reputation among the local public, the success in the cafe store business easier, but the author's argument is not cogent due to lack of strong and supportive evidence and logical analysis.
First, there is not connection between the interest for the book store and the cafe. Also the quality that the wide variety of books that attract the local residents. it states the the attraction of the people depends on the facility and range of books.Similarly in the case of cafe store, the quality is the important factor for the growth of business not only the name and fame of the store which is achieved by the another kind of business.With the lack of profound evidence, the argument is not supportive.
Secondly,it stated by the author about the cafe store made by replacing the children section. This decision is based on the national survey that the population of children age for 1-10 will be declined in near future. the authenticity of this survey is not presented here. To believe id to be true, there must be a systematic data that can be considered as a testimony before reply on it. Also, there might be a chance that although there will be a declination in number of children among the whole state but the population remain the same in that particular area . hence considering the state date will lead to the lose in business. the author's lack of in-depth analysis and missing evidence and argument have left the hole in the reasoning of the argument.
Moreover, the replacement of the children section with the cafe store might result in reducing the Quality if ambient of the book store. it might disturb the store's environment and make it congested. the specious seating arrangement is also one of the factor to attract the customers. Also it is not compulsory that every customer who regularly purchase a book or a member of the book store is also fond of coffee , Hence there is a chance of having separate group of people who are interested in coffee and books. there is not strong connection is represented by the author hence the argument is flawed.
In conclusion, the claim that is stated here by the author is flawed due to unwarranted evidence and supportive analysis. if the author present the proper evidence with logical arguments with more systematic research, there might be a scope to evaluate the viability of the success of business surely.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 462 350
No. of Characters: 2157 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.636 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.669 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.478 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.902 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.407 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.676 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The claim asserted by the author here th...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s local area and being in business more then twenty year, will increase the populati...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion among the local public, the success in the cafe store business easier, but t...
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Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...the cafe store business easier, but the authors argument is not cogent due to lack of s...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portive evidence and logical analysis. First, there is not connection between t...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... between the interest for the book store and the cafe. Also the quality that the ...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...erest for the book store and the cafe. Also the quality that the wide variety of bo...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...books that attract the local residents. it states the the attraction of the people...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... attract the local residents. it states the the attraction of the people depends on the...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... attract the local residents. it states the the attraction of the people depends on the...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...ends on the facility and range of books.Similarly in the case of cafe store, the quality...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ends on the facility and range of books.Similarly in the case of cafe store, the quality...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he facility and range of books.Similarly in the case of cafe store, the quality i...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the growth of business not only the name and fame of the store which is achieved ...
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...chieved by the another kind of business.With the lack of profound evidence, the argu...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dence, the argument is not supportive. Secondly,it stated by the author about t...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ment is not supportive. Secondly,it stated by the author about the cafe sto...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...r 1-10 will be declined in near future. the authenticity of this survey is not pres...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... remain the same in that particular area . hence considering the state date will l...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...main the same in that particular area . hence considering the state date will lead to...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...main the same in that particular area . hence considering the state date will lead to...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...considering the state date will lead to the lose in business. the authors lack of in-dep...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...date will lead to the lose in business. the authors lack of in-depth analysis and m...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hole in the reasoning of the argument. Moreover, the replacement of the childre...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e Quality if ambient of the book store. it might disturb the stores environment an...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stores'' or 'store's'?
Suggestion: stores'; store's
...of the book store. it might disturb the stores environment and make it congested. the ...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ores environment and make it congested. the specious seating arrangement is also on...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...of the factor to attract the customers. Also it is not compulsory that every custome...
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Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of the book store is also fond of coffee , Hence there is a chance of having separ...
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Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...who are interested in coffee and books. there is not strong connection is represented...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e author hence the argument is flawed. In conclusion, the claim that is stated ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...anted evidence and supportive analysis. if the author present the proper evidence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 459.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78431372549 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61536667725 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 705.55239521 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7065913574 57.8364921388 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.578947368 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.25449101796 609% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127188830307 0.218282227539 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410464894025 0.0743258471296 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593746893746 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766540470091 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058231309435 0.0628817314937 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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