Why people live longer nowadayd?
In today’s progressive world where we live, governments and scientists try to make life easier for human beings. They do that by inventing some facilitators, discovering the medicines, automating several interactions, etc. Owed to all these efforts, today, people have a simpler life than the whole history. As long as the level of welfare has improved, people could live longer than before. I think this way for several reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
The foremost reason, the level of the general-hygiene ameliorate significantly. Nowadays, physicians only do surgery in sterilizes environments, and fewer people die for not sanitizing reasons. Many people died in the past just because they ignore hygiene-protocols.
Although in the Coronavirus pandemic we have serious problems with people, who do not take attention warnings of the WHO to prevent spreading the virus, in my opinion, the overall level of hygiene today is higher than ever. The infection was widespread in the past, and people would die even because of a simple wound. But, today you can find sanitizers in every house around the world. Gratefulness the Coronavirus pandemic, we can easily observe the strongest cleanser in a variety of types in our place.
Secondly, in the twenty-first century, we have not any direct physical conflict between countries. So the rate of killing in the fights decreases noticeably. For example, in the second world war, more than ten million people died without any reasonable reasons, humans slaughtered each other. Fortunately, we have not experienced these kinds of stupid attacks, and governments try to solve their problem through debates. In this way, people's powers serve to develop the world and make it a better living place.
Thirdly, due to scientific' findings, the importance of exercise is clarified for everyone. People take serious attention to their mental and physical health today. They go to the gym weekly and yoga regularly. As long as these kinds of activities have entered their lifestyle, the longevity of people increases magically. Furthermore, people notice their diet too. Despite the past, people do not eat the first thing they see. They select the most nutritional of them. People do not eat just because they are feeling hungry, but they deliver vitamins and valuable minerals to their bodies through eating.
Last but not least, people work fewer hours in a day in compere to the Ronessanse time. They have more leisure time that can allocate that to become relax and enjoy life. Discoveries show that people who work approximately eight hours a day, feel more confident, and can growth other personality aspects. Then, they have healthier lives and live longer than others.
All in all, today people' longevity increase based on several reasons: such as improving the general level of hygiene in the world, no more war casualties, fewer working hour and decrease the hardness of many work by automatic vehicles. So people can have a longer and happier life comparing the whole history. Human beings were not as prosperous as they are today. I wonder why we have the highest rate of depression. Since we should be happy and thankful for all these gifts we have today that were bare in the past.
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| 2023-06-30 | AJ720 | 76 | view |
| 2023-04-11 | fmichela | 73 | view |
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| 2021-12-24 | Seilcaty | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2736.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76399404258 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 857.7 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7097308264 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4705882353 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44117647059 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212347054303 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569038887772 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702248215745 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107797747593 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451822498127 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.