People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
These days, it seems that more and more people drinking sweet beverages than ever before. This prevalent tendency stems from several reasons and there are numerous ideal solutions that would tackle this problem.
On the one hand, it is no doubt true that there are both individual and society factors that account for the proliferation of sugar-based drinks. First, it is undeniable that such drinks provide energy, which would allow people to maintain their mental alertness. For instance, when a person was in the condition of hypoglycemia, the only thing he needed to be better would be a cup of water added a little sugar. Besides, another contributing factor would be the omnipresence of beverages’ advertisements without any warning that the products could cause several health problems in long term. Therefore, customers who were devoid of knowledge would tend to consume them excessively and have life-threatening conditions.
On the other hand, there are certain actions that could be taken to address this issue. First, the government should impose higher taxes on sugary drinks, which would directly affect customers’ budgets. An exorbitant price would act as a hindrance that impacted people’s intentions about buying soft drinks, thereby decreasing the presence of such drinks being consumed. Second, more educational propagation campaign should be launched to incentive people to follow certain healthy dietary guidelines and lifestyles and to refrain from using sugar-based drinks.
In conclusion, the fact that people having more and more sugar-based beverages could be ascribed to a number of rationales and appropriate steps need to be taken to reverse this trend, not only by the policymakers but also by individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89230567174 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4381903478 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281069332167 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959378083961 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082596438045 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179640447593 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360446279635 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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