Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a widespread consensus of many people about the preservation of young adults with traditional value. In contrast, some advocate the for individualism supporting the young generation behavior. As well as offering my opinion, both views will be discussed in this essay.
On an one hand,preserving the traditional features probably has it own moral advantages. Specifically forefather's experiences could be the help for young people live. For instance, Vietnam is famous for the cultural values, one of this educate young adults to respect the elder generation, thus they have a well-behavior with their own family and friends. As a result, this will create a community spirit which cultivate youngs about the sense of having a good attitude, solidarity and patriotism. But, unfortunately, if having no continous inherited by younger generations , these traditions will fade and disappear. This is the reasonable for the preserving of young people to the traditional values.
As an opposed, I harbor a concern that young people individualism behavior should be respected. Firstly, this greatly stimulate young adults to make more effort for their life. Independently behavior can strengthen youngs spirit, hence, they have more chances to promote their own abilities which somehow can support for the nation development in the future. Moreover, it is unfair to the young generation to follow the traditions. There is no denying that they are living in a different world with their ancestor, where many traditional values are decadent, outdated and it is no longer suitable. Therefore, preserving these traditions can lead to the prevention for the self-develop of young generation. Finally, my standpoint is youngs have their own right to freely behave.
In conclusion, while many still believe that young adults must be followed the traditional values, this provided essay uphold the unrestrained behaviors of their own personalities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5016722408 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11373123796 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5164753537 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7647058824 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321407053464 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118833763168 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714425137707 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221047810761 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468111122355 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.