At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a well- documented fact that an increasing number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the imbalance of population in many countries. While there are some who strongly believe that the youth contribute greatly to the development of a society, others claim that older people play an important role in supporting young people to be better. Therefore, this has been an endless controversial issue, however, in my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with the former argument, and some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, professional is an obvious example for other people to support the opposite view. It is undeniable that old generation is trained enough to complete work effectively. For instant, a specialist physician needs at least 10 years of university studies and 2 or 3 years of practicing, which may not be able for a young adult yet.
On the other hand, there are two primary points for people to defend their view that adults bring more advantages in the current time. First and foremost, it is commomly accepted that youthful populations are more active and healthier to devote their life to work. Based on the report provided by The Ministry of Health, the number of ole people suffering from illness í increasing, thus they are unable to continue to work, and the economic development of a country is taken directly by the young people. In addition to this, there is no denying that younger people take the responsibility of connecting people and buildung up a friendly society. This is supported by the fact that adults are dynamic and productive to create outdoor activities, namely charites, environmental projects which can involve people together, therefore they are willing to take part in these activities as well as helping and communicating with others.
To conclude, it is my strong belief that young generation has a positive impact on the society and themselves as well. I, therefore, highly recommend that the awareness of the benefits from young citizens should be enhanced in the temporary world. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be guaranteed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10743801653 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94531973856 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6714211057 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21714196499 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640868729824 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038305554022 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11487859837 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609126750283 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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