A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education always plays a pivotal role to develop the country in real sense and this is showcased by many countries which have set great standards in the field of education.Taking the due importance of education,Every nation goes through all extents in making the rules,policies and amendments that benefit the students and secure them all the required potential to present themselves with a great career and thereby contribute to the society in all possible means.Having noted that,The nation make policies wherein a student can choose national where it provides the same pattern of study all over the country and with greater scope of learning things.But the nation also provides other alternatives such as state curriculum serving all the students' needs in terms of education and other activities.
In the First place,we can consider the policy which provides same national curriculum to all of its students.Which provides a great platform for students to build and showcase their talents .For Example, Students who study the same curriculum undergo similar education structure, timetables ,resources and timelines to conduct all the activities that helps students to brainstorm and participate in nation wide competitions to perform with various students and learn many things that embark them with a spectacular education journey.Besides,Students whose parents work for the government ,Military often undergo transfers in their jobs,which requires them to relocate to multiple states throughout their career.So the same national curriculum helps in continuing the pace the students follow and therefore inhibiting any kind of possible hurdles in their way.
In The second place, the nation also makes policies where states can design and structure the curriculum of their respective states.
Students following this structure are presented with all the possibilities to undergo overall education of a student.These states receive such policies because they have shown signs of developing the students in all forms of possible education and their curriculum provided the necessary knowledge to the student.For example,The kerala state has shown to exhibit long-term and overall education in various nation - wide surveys conducted which explains the students how the students are nurtured to take up their careers and achieve their goals.
Therefore,Given all the traits of the nation wide and state wide education curriculum.It all goes with the parents'a and the student's concern and choice to choose the curriculum having taken all the possibilities and consequences of each.As They always stand to provide all the necessary resources to progress a students life and furnish him/her with all the capabilities to face their world and build themselves with a great career and thereby contributing to the nation's build.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of, such as, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59906759907 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07513273203 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 23.0359550562 369% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.98353794 60.3974514979 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 480.4 118.986275619 404% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.8 23.4991977007 365% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 5.21951772744 475% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353264681758 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222005001701 0.0831039109588 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665794115989 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222005001701 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665794115989 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.8 14.1392134831 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 48.8420337079 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 12.1743820225 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.12 8.38706741573 145% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 11.2143820225 321% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.7820224719 467% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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