Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
It is a general hypothesis that the cost of a product is taken under consideration before purchasing anything new. However, I firmly disagree with this notion because there are some other important factors which are worth considering while shopping. In this essay, I will shed a light on the other factors and conclude my opinion.
Apparently, the price tag, quality, and warranty are some of the imperative elements which customers keep in buying a commodity. With regards to the former, the life and durability of any product depend on the superior quality of the material used to manufacture it. By any chance, if an item is made of poor quality, then no one will buy it, whether it is a reasonable price or an expensive one. For instance, the Zara clothing brand is known for its first-class fabric, and it is the first preference for consumers to buy Zara clothing items. However, the price is a bit higher because a better quality product is not available at a cheap price. Another important element that influence the customer's decision to buy anything from such brands because they provide an assurance in the form of the warranty period of a product. If there is any fault in an item, that item will be replaced immediately with a fault one, and it is considered as one of the key attributes to choose any household goods, especially electronic items such as Fridge, LEDs, A/C, Washing machine, and many more.
Furthermore, health and safety concerns also play a vital role before purchasing consumable goods. This is due to the fact that modern society is more health-conscious and aware of environmental issues. To illustrate, consumers are nowadays boycotting products that have plastic and paper packaging and switching to environmentally friendly items or organic products even if they have to spend an extra penny. The same applies to the tendency of buying food items and customers have to spend on sugar free products, overlooking the cost. Thus, the above examples sustain the role of these factors in shopper's shopping decisions.
To conclude, I disagree with the statement that individuals look only for money before buying any product because there are other compelling elements such as quality, life-expentancy, guarantee, and warranty of an item, and how safe it is for our health and environment which people care about a lot in this modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he price tag, quality, and warranty are some of the imperative elements which customers kee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, thus, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01767676768 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84750300974 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0698707288 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1875 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144864407658 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475708085189 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390179160857 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958967771089 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402366363148 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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