Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern day and age, thanks to the development of technology and the internet, it is no longer an obligation for people to work in offices, the same for study. Personally, I believe that this trend has an overall positive impact because it allows people to study and work more efficiently and they no longer need to be at a certain location to participate in the activity.
The irreplaceable role of technology is coming in broad daylight, especially during the pandemic, where social connections and direct meetings are strictly retained to reduce the spread of the virus. With the help of technology and online meeting apps such as Zoom or Microsoft Teams, office workers and students all over the world were able to continue their jobs. Another thing is that the internet offers a variety of information sources coming from e-libraries and programs provided by well-known universities and academic institutions. Therefore, studying and working from home is obviously possible and economical for both children and adults.
On the other hand, many argues that people are relying too much on technology, which will leave un-forecastable aftermaths later on. However, the advantages that technology have brought us may outweigh the disadvantages. For example, some think that online studying is not a lasting resolution since children need constant care, or else they will not focus on studying. Nevertheless, people who could not afford traditional tuition would consider e-learning as a good way to provide their children affordable and reliable education.
In conclusion, I think that technology is one of the most important invention of humankind. Not only serving as an entertaining tool, but technology is also helping us so much in our everyday lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, another thing, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29078014184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98139866355 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4922636587 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219922928933 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688796201569 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635511382066 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108636481719 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046171380897 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.