Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Computer has been the blessing of the modern science since the beginnig of the last century. Though it might be a contentious topic, I am strongly of the opinion that computer is certainly the most significant discovery of techonology era as other advancement in the era field has been possible due to having computer and it easen the daily life.
The top notch reason to patronize the comupter as the crucial invention because without it there would be no considerable improvement in science field of modern time. Every invention no matter how small its configuration is somehow depends on computer. For example, Men have been trying to reach the space from days and this intellection come into view due to the development of computer. Men can make spaceship with the help of pseudo spaceship made in computer to evaluate the exact configuration of the real one Additionally people are considering to invent robot to comfort their lives but the programming in developing a robot could not see the light unless computer has been used to programmised it.
Our daily lives hase become more stress free by using computer which is the another reason to support the aformentioned notion. From the dawn of the day ones dependency on computer begin by checking mails or daily routines or reading newspaper that printed by using computer. Advancement in transport for going to work has been computerised since the very early of this modern period. And scientists have brought improvement in even daily shopping through computer program. one can now easily buy their daily needs. For example in a lower developing country of Africa, 73% people prefer online shopping for their daily utensils.
In conlusion, computer Is the most momentous invention because it works as a seed for other distinct discovery along with delivering its beneficial aspects to human lives that are adequate to substantiate the positive belief of this disputable statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11006289308 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81525234071 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7431742431 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150725850069 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509445748236 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407648709626 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103855251524 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394890897815 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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