Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Saving the environment is always in the news in modern world. Some argue that extinction of certain flora and fauna is an important environmental issue whereas others say that there are more critical environmental problems. This essay will discuss both the views and suggest why working on environment will save the plant and animal species.
Two of the biggest factors affecting the environment currently are global warming and plastic accumulation. Global warming has led to melting of glaciers at the poles, increase in sea water levels and unpredictable weather patterns. Using appliances like air conditioners, refrigerators and many more are contributing to global warming. For example, the chlorofluorocarbons released by these machines are affecting the ozone layer which leads to increase in the temperatures on Earth. Additionally, plastic being used frequently for packaging is harming the environment since it is not bio-degradable. Accumulation of these bags in sea waters is harming aquatic life. Hence, we need to implement solutions for resolving these problems within the environment.
On the other hand, saving plant and animal species from being extinct is one of the biggest problems in current times. Many of these species represent the heritage of various countries and helps in attracting tourists. Extinction of such species will impact the economy of such places. Loss of them is a direct result of other environmental problems. To illustrate, the forest fires in recent times are a response to the rising temperatures across the world. These fires have led to the death of hundreds of animals and trees. Therefore, in my opinion, solving issues within the environment will have a significant effect on loss of flora and fauna.
To conclude, saving the various lives on Earth from disappearing is one of the most important issues in hand but developing remedies for other factors that are destroying this habitat is equally critical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3961038961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05263877235 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555194805195 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5999392835 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255994326516 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671854309847 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707963022563 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139969778409 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861368133864 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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