Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people state that the major environmental issue in this modern era is the loss of particular species of fauna and flora, while others suggest that there are problems that are much more prominent. While I agree that the loss of species is important, there are more issues that should be named and tackled.
To begin with, owing to industrialization, plants and animals are on the verge of extinction. Since the first factory was founded, our lives have become more advanced, this resulted in human yearnings search for lands, which has had a devastating effect on natural habitats. Animals lose their homes, while plants are being either cut down or burnt for industrial purposes. According to a report after the Amazon rainforest fire, approximately 2.5 billion trees were burnt. While on the other side of the sphere, endangered animals such as rhinos or tigers are suffering from hunger, as their natural environment has been converted into manufacturing lands.
On the other hand, extinction is not the only issue that we are currently facing. One problem that has affected our lives deadly is air pollution. This could also be explained by industrialization. Factory constantly pumping out exhaust fumes, traffic congestions in downtowns, or even everyday tasks now could make the air more contaminated. Air pollution has disastrous effects to humans’ health, namely are serious breathing issues, lung cancer or respiratory diseases. In addition, climate change also has an adverse impact on our lives. Extreme weather phenomena have become more intense and frequent, thus houses are destroyed and human lives become more vulnerable.
In conclusion, although the decrease in species is important, in my opinion, other issues should also be taken in consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...affic congestions in downtowns, or even everyday tasks now could make the air more conta...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should also be taken in consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35587188612 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88305869808 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7917293054 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196796835953 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583235144143 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658222698315 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120636062925 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737432959179 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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