Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the era of globalisation, governments and individuals around the world have more chance to approach other cultures, as well as foreign commodities than ever before. Therefore, it is true that nations are becoming increasingly similar to each other, and citizens from any country can purchase the same products which have equal qualities. Although this tendency has its demerit such as lowering the prices of special items from different countries, I of the opinion that this is a positive development since this offer dwellers with a range of diverse products and contribute in boosting the national economy.
To commence with, people from around the world could have the access to a wide range of foreign products, which means they no longer need to go oversea to purchase items or wait for a long time to order them from abroad. For instance, Western people can now buy durians or lychees from a local rentail outlet instead of going to an Asian nations to have a taste of them. Thanks to this tendency, local residents can save a vast amount of money for other fees, which partially enhance the citizens' living standard.
Furthermore, along with this tendency, export corporations have been established, which contribute a significant amount of money for the governments. Owing to this, the local and national authorities can invest in more essential are such as education and medication, which means the underpriviledged could have chances to access the education system, as well as free medication services are no longer impossible. This will foster young talents, equiping them with better studying facilities, which leads to a brighter future for each nation.
Eventhough special products from different culltures might lost is value due to its ubiquitous, this would not be a big problem compared to all the advantages that this tendency offer globally.
In conclusion, while this tendency still has its disadvantage, I believe that it brings about positive effects to different aspects of each country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'nation'?
Suggestion: nation
...ail outlet instead of going to an Asian nations to have a taste of them. Thanks to this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, still, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23692307692 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82709460495 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5965628499 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.727272727 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19654119938 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736362907039 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409540212832 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103464583584 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640066880052 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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