Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people think that children should be taught how to behave well in this day and age by their parents, the other people believe that school plays an important role in children’s manner. I personally assume that each will support each other in many aspect.
Every parents will have different methods in educating their child, equipped with knowledge to step out the society. However, each person has their own ways which lead to arguments. Because of their different’s awareness, the child is influenced and act like what their mom and dad had taught them. For instance, family background is the place where child was born and how they act in future. A handful of people born in poor family which busy with work or do not have enough knowledge to teach their child. As a result, child do not behave well and become a good member in society.
Being educated at school is a good way to teach kids. Teachers take care of them and have ethic class in order to show children ways to act and have good morality. Children who are studying at school and have parents teach have a number of benefits. School curriculumn is complied from countless people and undergoes censorship so as to have good quality for teenagers.
To sum up, there are many good reasons both for and against children’s education but I believe that children should be taught at school and their parents is the best method so as to become a member behave well in life.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views and 81
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...me that each will support each other in many aspect. Every parents will have different met...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m and dad had taught them. For instance, family background is the place where chi...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e where child was born and how they act in future. A handful of people born in poor famil...
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...born in poor family which busy with work or do not have enough knowledge to teach...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...untless people and undergoes censorship so as to have good quality for teenagers. To su...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ol and their parents is the best method so as to become a member behave well in life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69019607843 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39551676611 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1704701528 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264853403255 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935907511298 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848518332425 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179549339878 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723020264817 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.