Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
The argument whis is stated here having so many falls assumptions . Eating boiled animals bones increases is big misleading sargument without evidences.
Proponents claims doesn't have any base evidence, its just a assumption that eating boiled animals bones may gets humans into many troubles. what if the animal bone has bone cancer or any bone related disease. By making this claims the human life may be encountered in so many transfer disease through to the generations.
the assumption may be true if they provide evidence that boiling animal bones for several hours make bones are non harmful and gives clearly evidence to this then the aergument will be stronger.
One of the baseless claim is that by taking bone soup that makes people healthier is flawed. There is no evidence that taking bone soup of animals can makes people healthier, and healing joints and making promoting nerve regeneration is all are pointless claims. there are so many vegeterians who dont take any bone soups and they are recovering from huge brain tramas only with their routine food style.(i.e. vegetreian)
the claim is only true when the claim is strengthened by the certified doctor approval. Then only the argumanet has is valid. Without Those the assumptions are clearly pointless.
And in the last sentence we can see that the ancedotal studies evidence gives results fully opposite too the claims which is mentioned before. And the human is changed so much when compared ancestors and the climate is also changed so much. So, following there food diets doesnt improve than the man who taking advanced nutrients and may be some will be gets good health and all. But, mostly people fell into sick and may causes to death also.
And ancestors had god gifted knowledge that we don,t have that,s the main reason. They leave their leaves happily and
Paleo diets are popular only because they are living diffrent to this current people . there is not getting anything from that they justing putting their lifes into risk themseleves.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1649 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.85 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.332 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.491 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.308 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 336.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02678571429 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38854163097 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8089141002 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.70786347227 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246403504706 0.218282227539 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731129047554 0.0743258471296 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649015176618 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105469591365 0.128457276422 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558283388939 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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