The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, global environmental pollution is increasingly significant for many governments, and some people think that this phenomenon should be tackled by the increase in the cost of vehicles’ fuel. Personally, I completely disagree with this idea, and I therefore believe that other measures should be more considerate
On the one hand. I strongly do not agree with the idea of increasing fuel’s cost for some particular reasons. The main important reason is that this measure obviously can not solve the issues. Indeed, despite the remarkable growth in cost to operate vehicles, people still need to use their own cars or motorbikes due to the fact that they are likely to study or work far away from home. Hence, it seems that this ideal has rarely positive influence on the habitats.
On the other hand, there are still many solutions for the problem. First and foremost, we should encourage people to use public transports instead of owning vehicles. This can reduce the number of cars and congestion, following with the downward trend in the amount of emission on the air. Moreover, governments should gain more and more attention for renewable energy, which can replace fossil fuel to run the vehicle without emitting hazardous waste to the environment.
In conclusion, i do not believe that increasing cost of fossil fuel is a efficacious way to cope with the environment problem all over the world, and it seems to me that there are more effective methods for this current issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03585657371 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72578100099 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2993357006 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289151617755 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100824639432 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863463271457 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175110838339 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337169900508 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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