The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010.
The graph compares the number of some popular items sold in two bakeries located in London on a typical Saturday. It illustrates the average sales of eight items including doughnuts, toasted sandwiches and cakes at Lovely Loaves and Bernie’s Buns in 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that Bernie’s Buns was the busiest bakery on a Saturday outselling Lovely Loaves in 6 out of 8 items. Interestingly, savory snacks such as fresh loaves, salads and crisps are not as popular as sweet items like cookies and rolls.
First of all, regarding the sales of Bernie’s Buns, doughnuts were the number one purchase with almost 140 items sold every Saturday. It was followed by cookies and cakes, selling around 115 and 105 respectively. Savory foods are less popular. Bernie’s Buns sold nearly as many crisps as rolls, leaving the shelves at approximately 75. Then, at the bottom of the list were toasted sandwiches and salads with just 25 and 18 sales in turn.
On the other hand, doughnuts were also the best-seller of Lovely Loaves with 120 items sold on average. Cakes were ranked second with almost 80 sales, after which cookies came next with 70. Salads were sold over 60, three times as many were sold in Bernie’s Buns. Next, rolls and fresh loaves were joint-fifth with nearly 50 sales. To conclude, the least sold item was toasted sandwiches with just above 20 items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ches with just above 20 items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, as to, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47581994865 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5911769807 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3571428571 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116627294053 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429849680948 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742901024276 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103143456903 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112442055744 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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