Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only In the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket In Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River Is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so- called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean
As the Author states that palea's woven basket were only made by palean people this was not correctly proved by author in the argument because the question that arises here is at what extent only palean people use to make these baskets as there were people also from the neighbouring villages also, that they use to also make those baskets with them together. Maybe there were maximum of palea's people engaged and less of neighbouring villagers engaged so that's why they gave the name as palea's woven baskets.
And the next question arises here is whether palea's people use to go to sell these basket to neighbouring villages to maximise their profit and there did they teach those villagers to make these baskets of the same pattern as the palea. And the palea's villager had gone to different villages for selling their baskets then the local villager's must have learnt to makes these baskets on their own by observing how the baskets are made. And as the author says that rather then the river across the Brim River from Palea as it was deep and broad people couldn't swim and cross the river and boats were only the way to cross the river which were not found their, Maybe the must have travelled to Lithos by some different route through passing from different Village . Even people from different villages must have visited to Palea in search of Employment must have learnt the making of the basket and have increase the productivity of baskets in their own village and the uniqueness must have not been there.
Maybe be the pattern of palea's people basket must be resembling with pattern of Lithos villager's basket which was not called unique as they were neighbouring villagers then there must be working together to make the baskets. After hearing that Palea's basket were famous in their Village someone from out side of village must have robbed their baskets and must have try to make the baskets of the same pattern and started using in their own village and soled it there in their village.
Therefore after listing down all the points from above the Author argument is weaken by saying that the Palea's basket's uniqueness was not there and many people try to make them rather than only Palea's people making them.
- These days if you pick up a newspaper or turn on the TV or radio you may hear or read about the advantages of driverless cars also called self driving or autonomous cars The technology is simple to understand using sensors and computers these cars can dri 60
- The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep th 55
- The main objective of education is to procure a job 50
- Claim Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts Reason Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgement and perspective than do members of the general public 50
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted Increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this period most of the complaints re 55
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 1833 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.132 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.599 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.504 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.189 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e Author states that paleas woven basket were only made by palean people this was...
^^
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...re is at what extent only palean people use to make these baskets as there were peo...
^^^
Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ss of neighbouring villagers engaged so thats why they gave the name as paleas woven ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...on arises here is whether paleas people use to go to sell these basket to neighbour...
^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this basket' or 'these baskets'?
Suggestion: this basket; these baskets
...whether paleas people use to go to sell these basket to neighbouring villages to maximise th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... by observing how the baskets are made. And as the author says that rather then the...
^^^
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ade. And as the author says that rather then the river across the Brim River from Pa...
^^^^
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...m Palea as it was deep and broad people couldnt swim and cross the river and boats were...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 760, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e through passing from different Village . Even people from different villages mus...
^^
Line 3, column 880, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mployment must have learnt the making of the basket and have increase the product...
^^
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leas basket were famous in their Village someone from out side of village must h...
^^
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...e famous in their Village someone from out side of village must have robbed their bask...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their Village someone from out side of village must have robbed their baskets a...
^^
Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...have robbed their baskets and must have try to make the baskets of the same pattern...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e and soled it there in their village. Therefore after listing down all the points from ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weakened'.
Suggestion: weakened
...oints from above the Author argument is weaken by saying that the Paleas baskets uniqu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7519379845 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11546762273 2.78398813304 76% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392764857881 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2310366653 57.8364921388 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.333333333 119.503703932 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 23.324526521 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320224718249 0.218282227539 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164354420427 0.0743258471296 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433827921161 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210864939727 0.128457276422 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522479950838 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 14.3799401198 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.3550499002 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.197005988 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 12.3882235529 137% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.