At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in recent years, the number of young men and women is more significant than the population of the elderly in some nations. While this tendency could lead to a higher unemployment rate, it would provide a younger workforce and foster the growth of global economy, which is positive overall.
To begin with, large number of young persons would create a competitive environment for those who seek for jobs. As there are many candidates for each position, companies would only select the ones who excel their entrance tests or have outstanding performances. Large enterprises would only select graduates from prestigious universities, for example. This could give rise to the situation where the unemployment rate accelerate, which then increase the crime grade.
However, this tendency would provide corporations with a source of young employees and boost the growth of the economy. Young individuals are often enthusiastic and creative, which encourage innovation. This is preferred by employers as it play a key role in the success of every organizations. A prevalent example is the well-known Google company, their staffs are often young people who have amazing creativity and efficiency. Furthermore, the economy would grow in fast pace as young workforce is more productive. It then raise the living standards of the society and decrease poverty, which could save millions of lives from starvation. If economy grow faster, government bodies will offer the public more health services with no extra charge, which then lower the moral rate of the world.
In conclusion, young population could turn those who lack academic knowledge and skills into jobless individuals, however, I believe that the benefits of a more energetic workplace and rapid economic growth would prevail over the drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 525, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...g workforce is more productive. It then raise the living standards of the society and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83114891453 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7776986026 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146350607273 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514531118287 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449598980676 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871318008065 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029144572657 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.