Many people think that too much attention and resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, many people believe that there is too much attention and too much investment in the conservation of wild animals and birds. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the aforementioned views as preserving wild creatures brings variety benefits.
To begin with, it is obvious that wild animals play an indispensable role in human life. Wild animals and humans have similar lifestyles and body structures which helps scientists in curing and producing medicines. For instance, the scientists carried out research on bats and mice which have the same body structure as humans during the Covid 19 epidemic to create a vaccine. Additionally, wild creatures also help the balance ecosystem, which affects greatly in the habitat of people and animals. It helps reduce global warming and extreme weather.
Nowadays, the government and non-state organizations invest billions of dollars in rebuilding wildlife to save and protect animals. The main reason is that there are millions of hectares of forests, which are housing millions of species in the world, being damaged by humans to build infrastructures. For example, in Vietnam, the rate of natural forest was 60% in 2010, but it fell to 50% in 2015 following the extinction of many species such as tigers, foxes and owls. In order to address this case, the authority encouraged resident planning the tree and had policies with the aim of preserving natural forest.
In conclusion, although many people think that the protection of wild animals and birds was spent too much money, I am of the opinion that the government should spend more money to preserve wild animals because of the importance and the benefits for human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15162454874 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76332980421 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6874955427 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266739747228 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855582260016 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113087204512 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182971376463 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127078482621 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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