Nowadays, a lot of companies switch to open offices. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that enclosed offices have been the traditional kind of workspace for an innumerable amount of years; The image of a typical partitioned office space with a private corner of one’s own has appeared on shows, advertisement, movies for decades, so why giant now are switching to open-space office. While I understand that critics may see this as a crucial change to adapt to the new lifestyle, I would contend that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are innumerable reasons why people might disapprove of this adjustment, the first objection is that having too much auditory and visual distractions in the way would therefore cause inattentiveness and in turn reduce productivity. Another argument against this change would be the lack of privacy, having a colleague be able to give a quick glance at your computer every single time is quite disturbing, in fact in the worst case this can turn into confidential info being leaked and being taken advantage of.
In spite of the downsides mentioned above , I believed that tearing down barriers in workspace could build a sense of camaraderie between workers and eliminate hierarchy that have been laying around for decades is a positive measure . First and foremost it could partly slash construction cost of building walls and barriers to partition the workspace, although not affect much but this can be essential to the premises appearance. It should also be noted that having a shared office space can boost the creativity for example the big corporation is using right now, moreover sharing an office could facilitate communication and collaboration between workers.
In sum, it seems to me that having walls and barriers be discarded is advantageous in a variety of ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, kind of, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12937062937 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93195192838 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9116932534 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.375 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093065353383 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388046325737 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373218645266 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589398015581 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474839798819 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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