Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Individuals have had to give up their dream of becoming a doctor, lawyer, an accountant due to the inability to afford various tuition fees. Some students have had to drop-out of school half way because they couldn't afford the higher degree costs. Although the role of tuition fees in education cannot be underestimated and easily overlooked, tuition fees allows individual institution to provide various amenities for their students and staffs. The recommendation is that government should offer free education for all it's students. I strongly agree with this prompt for two reasons.
A fundamental argument could be made to disagree with the above prompt. Such argument could stem from questions such as how will faculty members paid their allowances and salaries? How will the school mintain it's laboratories equipments and provide reagents needed for it's research-based students? All these questions and more will beg for answers on how government will sustain their high educational standard without the aid of tuition fee from it's students. It may also be argued that the presence of free-tuition will allow students take education for 'granted'. Many will believe that, because these student are not investing money in their studies, then they won't show the alacrity and diligence needed to take their studies seriously.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned example, it is well known that students run into debt all in the name of going to colleges and universities. Student-loan is very common in institution and statistics have shown that it takes years (more than ten years in some cases) to pay up such loans. Some student did not grow up in a 'priviledge-home' and probably did not have trust funds waiting for them to cater for their needs at higher institution. A typical example is the case of a student who wants to become a medical student. Such student will have to go to college first for four years and then attend medical school in order to earn their MD. The accumulation of tuition fees during this period is exorbitant! Or a student who wants to be a lawyer will also have to go to law school, graduate and then use the next consectuive years paying up loan. If government can scrap tuition fees and make it part that of their yearly budget, such individuals and many more can attend schools and attain their career goals without worrying about becoming insolvent.
Furthermore, some countries are already following the tuition-free system. Germany is an example. In Germany, student attend colleges and universities without paying any dime. This encourage students to attend schools focusing solely on their studies without having to do two or more part-time jobs. In the United States, it is common a common thread that students takes up part-time jobs to aid their cost of living while worrying about not floundering their various courses. Juggling work and studies will definitely take it's toll on such students as they won't perform as they should in their classes. A typical example where tuition-free works, is the case of PhD students. Most PhD courses especially the STEM courses waive tuition fee for it's accepted students while covering their monthly stipends and health insurance. This allows PhD students to focus on their education and give off good results.
In conclusion, the expenses that comes with attending colleges and universities is far more than free education. Individuals will have to worry about cost of living, accommodation, stipends/allowances e.t.c If government can make education free, then it will be like a weight being lifted off their shoulders. That way students get to focus on other costs aside tuition. If certain countries can do it, that means it is very possible for other countries to follow suit.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...rop-out of school half way because they couldnt afford the higher degree costs. Althoug...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...ranted. Many will believe that, because these student are not investing money in their studie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample is the case of a student who wants to become a medical student. Such studen...
^^
Line 4, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... medical student. Such student will have to go to college first for four years an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3151.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12357723577 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80328409994 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474796747967 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 938.7 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3522896387 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.64516129 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8387096774 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25806451613 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148215910903 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053187202412 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515289920939 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101782426212 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196919466362 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...rop-out of school half way because they couldnt afford the higher degree costs. Althoug...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...ranted. Many will believe that, because these student are not investing money in their studie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample is the case of a student who wants to become a medical student. Such studen...
^^
Line 4, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... medical student. Such student will have to go to college first for four years an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3151.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12357723577 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80328409994 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474796747967 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 938.7 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3522896387 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.64516129 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8387096774 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25806451613 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148215910903 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053187202412 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515289920939 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101782426212 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196919466362 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.