A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There are debates among educators whether the use of national curriculum rather than decentralized curriculum benefits more or not, and the author suggests that a nation should adopt centralized curriculum. However, it shall be argued that sticking to national curriculum has some disadvantages.
Admittedly, requiring all students to follow a centralized education curriculum has some advantages over decentralized curriculum. For one, it is easier to evaluate the students' academic performance before entering college, for every student has followed the same course of study. In a decentralized system where study materials differ from schools to schools, the levels of the curriculum may significantly vary, thus it is hard to determine the qualities of studies students have done so far. For example, many countries including South Korea and U.K. adopt national curriculum for most of the students, and high average academic performances of the students in South Korea proves the efficacy of such policy to some extent. Accordingly, requiring students to follow the same standardized curriculum has some obvious benefits.
However, the flaws and disadvantages of national curriculum cannot be overlooked. The potentials of students vary significantly; some very talented students easily follow the standard curriculum and are even capable of studying more advanced ones, whereas others have hard time understanding the basic materials. In such situation, a decentralized approach, where talented students are given more advanced education to further improve their potentials, and students falling back are given additional care to help them develop some basic skills and abilities, seems more effective. For example, many countries such as U.S. use decentralized curriculum, and such policy has been proven to be able to handle difficulties that arise from national curriculum. Even in aforementioned South Korea, there are many "Science high schools," in purpose to teach more advanced topics in mathematics and science to gifted students in those fields. As such, in many cases, the decentralized approach seems more plausible.
In conclusion, the assertion given by the author is formulated too extremely, since the benefits from decentralized education cannot be neglected. In fact, many countries such as South Korea adopt some kind of hybrid approach, in order to exploit the advatages from both centralized and decentralized ones. Perhaps the best solution is to use both of them, according to the education environment of each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70418848168 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14398341696 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507853403141 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1664838524 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1875 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160644256529 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646742644991 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485202235518 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107382111694 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718382780401 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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