People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
This topic raises a though provoking issue of whether the actions of the people during the emotions should be justified or not.Indisputdely, emotions play an important role in decisions making of most of the people nevertheless most of the decisions go down an wrong because of the lack of sense while being emotional. I would strongly agree that the people who make decisions based on emotions and try to justifiy them are poor decison makers.
Emotions are important part of the day to day life of every human being. According to the author of the book The Emotional Intelligence , Daniel khamen says that these emotions are essential for the survival of us . They have been a part of limpid part of the brain which is one of the early parts of brian. They help us to remember the bad expeience we had so that when ever we are in any such situatin again we may make a better decision . For example when a child touches a hot pot the pain which he feels is stored in his brain as an emotion and when ever he seen such a pot he does'nt touch it.
However, these emotions are not always good when we about to make any decisions. When ever we are angry , scared or sad , our emotional part of brain takes control of the things preventing from our logical brian to make decisions. For example a cashier at a bank who was completely in debet decided to steal money form the bank . He was scared that his family will be on road if he did'nt do something to pay his debt. His emotions hijacked his brian and in this state he stole the money. Later when he was caught he revealed the reason behind his act.
People who are in a state of depression and suicide are also an examples of the wrong decision making. During depression emotions makes the person blind and does'nt let him see the options available to him to get out of the situation. To illustrate, let look at an example of one of my classmates, after the sudden dead of her mother she was left in a shock which later turned into depression. After few months she comitted suicide as she was unable to cope with the truth that her mother was no more. Several people commit crimes such as murder, rape when they are overtaken by emotions.
Conversely, there have been cases in which emotions played a important role in decision making. For example, when a rober invaded a house,a father protected his family from the armed rober in a fight which resulted in the death of the invader. In this case the father actions can be justified.
In conclusion, emotions are important but a person should be very careful while making decisions based on emotions. Without any such efforts the person can be considered as a poor decision maker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51028806584 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44655004285 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491769547325 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1998763448 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3043478261 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1304347826 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256508258298 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769116134284 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783209621509 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153624812704 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936365157122 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.