Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school
Discuss advantages of both methods and giver your opinion
With the advent of technology it has become easier to teach children at home for their progress. However, some people are of the opinion that education that is provided at school is a lot better than that at home. I think that the merits of studying at school outweigh the advantages of studying at home.
A multitude of people today are switching to the method of home education. Firstly, the major benefit of home-bound studying is that the parents can thoroughly monitor the child's performance. Moreover, parents could even help their siblings to develop different abilities such as better grasping power, memory enhancement and logical thinking ability. Additionally, field visits can be organised to which will help the offspring to understand the concept more easily.
The education which provided in school may be slightly different but this is more convenient source as it has many advantages. The crucial forte is that the child will be able interact with different individuals of various age groups and hence they would be well structured in handling people. Moreover, due to presence of other students they will be motivated to study more in order to compete with rest of the children. Also, the feeling of isolation might be eliminated as the engagement will rise. If the child finds understanding some concepts enigmatic, they can even ask assistance from their colleagues.The child may even develop the feeling of independence at an earlier age.
In conclusion, both the methods have their pros and cons but the pros certainly outnumber the drawbacks considering tuition issued at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80510945477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9626261039 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254760614299 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889078351479 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747957809475 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152695066987 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105259646977 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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