Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is hard to overstate the inextricable relationship between the environment and humankind. However, for decades, people have done too much damage to the nature in their process of development, and the consequences of this are now unequivocal. In light of this, they are trying to find viable solutions to fix the environmental problems. While it is believed that the authority should take on this responsibility, opponents of this cite compelling reasons for the important role individuals can play in the process. Despite justifications behind both viewpoints, I strongly advocate the involvement of both groups of people to mitigate the severity.
On the one hand, it is justifiable why the government is the leading force in solving the issue. First and foremost, the governments have the authority to pass laws and legislation to control illegal behaviors that can have detrimental effects on the surroundings. As a case in point, people will be likely to keep on littering in public places without an official ban on this activity from the authority. Additionally, big sums of money from the government can be allocated to environmental projects and campaigns, raising people awareness and having widespread influence in certain problems. Therefore, it is believed that government plays an integral role in saving the planet.
Nevertheless, such measures would not be successfully implemented without the help from individuals. Ordinary people can contribute to the environment preservation by simply changing some of their daily habits. As each uses water more reasonably, avoids plastic bags and bottles whenever possible, taking a bus instead of using private vehicles on the daily basis, it will gradually pile up and enventually make a big difference to the whole situation. These are testaments to what people can do to fix the problems. Without their collaboration, the deterioration of our environment will continue, despite the government’s tremendous effort to save it.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the rationales behind both way of thinking, I believe that environmental protection is the huge responsibility that must be borne by everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5119760479 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34502964855 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4607918293 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207249541159 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596766230451 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436846362503 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124383886663 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378949419638 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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