Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The assertion suggests that some people think physical strength matters for success in sports, while some think it is the mental strength that matters to excel in sports. People can have a diverse opinion on this according to personal experiences.
Physical strength surely matters when it comes to sports. As, when we consider the scenario of outdoor sports like football, cricket, basketball , tennis or even sprinting. The players and athletes require a substantial amount of physical energy or strength to compete in the respective sport and excel. But in addition to this the players must also be mentally aligned and have a strong mental strength to achieve success in sports.
Because in plethora of scenarios during out door sports we see that though a particular player has the required physical strength, but as sports are challenging and every time one may not have the energy to excel in it by only banking on physical strength. As many times during the last seconds of the race or last crucial minutes of a competition of sports the will power or in other words the mental strength plays a very important role to determine your success. As mental power is a kind power which gives one the strength to excel even if the person is lacking the physical prowess.
People who think that only mental power is more important in a sport are also missing the point that in a sport both physical and mental prowess matters. It is never the case that one of them overpowers the other. For instance, consider a athlete who at the start line of the race is already tired or has less physical strength to take part in the race. The result is that person cannot run properly and will probably not even finish the race due to obvious reasons. Though that person may have immense mental strength to excel in the race, but the persons lack of physical strength is constraining his path to achieve success.
Hence people must understand that both strengths discussed here that is physical and mental matters in a sport and none of them can override the other. Therefore I personally feel and also by the above discussed points it is clear that both mental and physical power are the foremost requirement to achieve success and excel at various levels in sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...owers the other. For instance, consider a athlete who at the start line of the ra...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...raining his path to achieve success. Hence people must understand that both streng...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nd none of them can override the other. Therefore I personally feel and also by the above...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81282051282 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45022131394 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8284429633 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445553266949 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147168670683 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106730525641 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270425141236 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742248035087 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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