While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both side and give your opinion
Whether global warming or forest clearance is the most threatening issue to our planet has been a matter of debate sine the beginning of the twenty-first century. While many believes that one of them is the core problem that leads to many environmental consequences, I personally believe that both are harmful to the environment.
There are several adverse impacts that global warming has influenced on the Earth. Firstly, as carbon emission being released from factories, it causes global temperature to rise and this results in the depletion of ozone layer. In fact, without the protection of ozone layer, climate change may possibly happen and people’s activities can be affected negatively. For instance, without raining for months, inhabitants in the South of Vietnam is now lacking water for daily activities and people claimed that they were struggle to maintain their life. Secondly, if global warming is increasingly worse, it will lead to serious natural disasters such as hurricane or flooding. Furthermore, those natural disasters are believed to pose threat to not just human’s lives but also animals and plants survival.
On the other hand, there are some negative effects that deforestation can cause to the world. Firstly, it is widely believe that urbanisation is putting pressure on natural resources. In fact, many animals and plants are endangered because many people exploit forests to build up houses and generate products which then leads to the lack of fresh air and defences from natural disasters since trees have been cut down. Secondly, biodiversity may be decreased from forest clearance as it harms animals and trees. For example, many species like Koala and Kangaroos have been endangered due to the burnt of Amazon forest.
To conclude, both issues are equally disastrous and people should better find way to tackle the problems before we encounter with extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...otection of ozone layer, climate change may possibly happen and people’s activities can be a...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...otection of ozone layer, climate change may possibly happen and people’s activities can be a...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...ities and people claimed that they were struggle to maintain their life. Secondly, if gl...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...use to the world. Firstly, it is widely believe that urbanisation is putting pressure o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31456953642 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73191651314 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62582781457 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2095813111 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217164943054 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684570769047 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463389717038 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124946323669 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393265601065 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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