It is more important to keep your old friend than to make new friends
Friends are the secret keepers, full of memories and are somewhat like personal diaries. I would say friends’ makes lives more beautiful. Personally I believe that it is important to keep your old friend as well as make new friends. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
In different stage of life our older friends may not be with us and creating new friends is so much fun. To begin with, the friends from our childhood may not be with us right now but they share special bond. And also we tend to make new friends in this stage, we have tendency to want more than why not more friends and create more love and fun among each other. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I remember when I was young I used to have few groups of friends that were everything to me now they are special but also I have bunch of new friends in my undergrad that are very close to me. The different environment different circumstances demand different friends.
Furthermore, I strongly believe friends carries lot of memories, affection, love, care understanding, and affecting that friendship never becomes old with the age, the freshness, the love even grows stronger with time. The single circle of friends or certain bunch of friends only last lifelong but interaction shows affection to many more people to have friendship with them.
To put it in nutshell, the old friends are equally important as making new friend is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bunched'.
Suggestion: bunched
...me now they are special but also I have bunch of new friends in my undergrad that are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, i feel, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72868217054 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62694638408 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.877483032 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524655130427 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194227805511 0.076458572812 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176368043734 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357531316652 0.150856017488 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126149108194 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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