People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work.
The debate over hobbies and how to spend our leisure time has always been a prominent issue among people. While some people might believe spend their free time in activities close to their routine life, I am strongly on the belief that relaxing in different way from our routine daily life have some advantages for some reasons, and I will analyze my reasons throughout this essay.
To begin, spending leisure time in different way can help us to experience wide variety things, which help us to get rid of daily challenges, so we can remove tensions and anxieties that we suffer, and achieve prosperity. To be specific, I remember when I was student at university, in last year, our courses became tough, all professors assigned us many projects, in addition, we had to study many books. While all of my classmates spend all their time on studying, I decided to save my hobbies, so some times during my I walked and did some sports, which helped me to be relaxed an did my best, while my classmate, who did not take time for hobbies, could not overcame their stress, so they failed.
In addition, relaxing and doing physical activities in different way from our daily life, help us broaden our horizon. When we do exercise in different places, we can interact with different people, so we can talk to them and gain different ideas, which broaden our perspective. For example, last year, I used to play football in sport complex, where many people from different part of city came there to do exercise. I remember in those they I used to talk with some guys, who worked in national museum, by talking with them, I recognize how they lifestyle of ancient people was.
Finally, it seems to me it is better to spend time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work. not only can we achieve success, but also we can broaden our horizon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: overcome
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67365269461 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47605514484 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1169762274 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332592913126 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14472198314 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16760978847 0.0737576698707 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235136435293 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132698271402 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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