You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In you letter.
describe the problem with the equipment.
explain how this problem is affecting your work.
say what you want the shop or company to do.
Dear Sir,
I am Kamalpreet, I am writing this letter to complaint you about the printer, I bought from your authorized store, around six month ago. I am working as freelance marketing agent and almost every week I have to send hard copies of official proposals to different advertisement agencies. It almost a month I am facing issue with my printer. There are numerous problem with it. Firstly, it leaves black spot all over the page, whenever I take black-white printouts. Secondly, Incase of color printout it does not print letters, that are in red and blue colours. Lastly, It also make substantial noise while printing more than twenty pages at one.
I am unable to perform my work efficiently from home, because even for printing out a single page I have to reach out to the closest printing shop which is 2 miles away from my home. Also I am spending a lot of extra money for each print. My printer is still under warranty and the model number is AMEX-4689C and for your reference I am also providing my purchase order number, that is 18764679A9. I am really disappointed with your product and want a replacement for this printer or provide me a fix of this issue as soon as possible.
Looking forward for a quick action from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Kamalpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Kamalpreet, I am writing this lette...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... from your authorized store, around six month ago. I am working as freelance marketin...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...to different advertisement agencies. It almost a month I am facing issue with my printer...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...sue with my printer. There are numerous problem with it. Firstly, it leaves black spot...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: In case of
...I take black-white printouts. Secondly, Incase of color printout it does not print letter...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...n red and blue colours. Lastly, It also make substantial noise while printing more t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from home, because even for printing out a single page I have to reach out to the...
^^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hop which is 2 miles away from my home. Also I am spending a lot of extra money for ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71555555556 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66629627057 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662222222222 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4317454263 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194232613426 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696473254889 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589437640016 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118073360489 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283078985583 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.